Tuesday, August 17, 2010

Eye See YOU ! by john tucker

Eye See YOU !

Eye see you when you are awake.
Eye see you while you sleep!

Eye see the foolish things you do,
And that is why eye weep!

Eye am always watching over you.
Eye am the wise voice deep within.

Eye walk through life beside you
Eye suffer when you sin.

Eye am the deepest part of you,
Eye will forever be.

The friend, who will not leave you;
No matter what I see.


  1. What a lovely and wonderfully written poem John. I wouldn't be surprised if you don't win with this poem. It is simply lovely.
    Tamara Lesley

  2. Thank you again Tamara - you are so kind with your comments and I am pleased you derive enjoyment from reading my poetry.
    Yours is very lovely to read also. From your writing your caring, compassionate and very spiritual outlook in life is much in evidence.
    lol john xx

  3. John, You have my Vote, you are truly the best Poet that entered the Contest. My Friend, I believe all three of your poems are Winners.